Post 4: Flash fiction story

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 He enters the room. Everyone stops, all attention is drawn upon him. He breaks the tension with a small wave of the hand, and proceeds to the corner where a person sits by themselves.

“This seat taken” he asks. 

“Are you in it?” asks the person. 

       “What?” he responds with a question in his eyebrow.     


The person does not give a response. The person only begins to occupy themselves with paper and a pencil. The person began to write on the paper, focused, as if they were working on an essay. He looks down at the page and notices its emptiness. He squats on the ground, the talking and laughter of the room deafening his ears. He puts his head on his knees and his arms begin holding himself together. He lets out a silencing sigh, and ask himself “Am I here all alone?” 

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  1. Clara ChristianFebruary 6, 2022 at 7:37 PM

    You did a great job! I really enjoyed this and I feel that you told it in a way where readers feel connected to the awkwardness the protagonist is feeling. Well written.

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